for Roses1/17/2005 c1 ladydaisy
Aren't all roses always wilting? :(
Aren't all roses always wilting? :(
8/6/2004 c1 
9write thing
that's really good - strange how you mentioned the song. ths could be a really cool story
9write thingthat's really good - strange how you mentioned the song. ths could be a really cool story
5/23/2004 c1 8Sky Inlucy
That was wonderful, amazing. Really makes you think. Going on my favorites list!
8Sky InlucyThat was wonderful, amazing. Really makes you think. Going on my favorites list!
5/16/2004 c1 feh
uh...GOOD. I like taht Outcast song-it's now in my head.
But, back to the point, LOVES IT!
uh...GOOD. I like taht Outcast song-it's now in my head.
But, back to the point, LOVES IT!
4/27/2004 c1 28Rionarayne
Wow... I was getting a totally different vibe from the summary. You've got to admit, "roses smell like boohoo" is nothing like this.
I think maybe it might be a little redundant, but it's still one of my favorites; I like how you really get all of the facets of her feelings, and how one thing can really mean many different things. Very guud.
Rionarayne
28RionarayneWow... I was getting a totally different vibe from the summary. You've got to admit, "roses smell like boohoo" is nothing like this.
I think maybe it might be a little redundant, but it's still one of my favorites; I like how you really get all of the facets of her feelings, and how one thing can really mean many different things. Very guud.
Rionarayne
4/25/2004 c1 mrs.shigwa.cobain
Wow, that's somewhat depressing, but has a meaning behind it, as stated in the summary. Short, sweet, and not to the point (that's a good thing, to the point makes for a very boring story), but danced around the point as good authors do. Well done.
Wow, that's somewhat depressing, but has a meaning behind it, as stated in the summary. Short, sweet, and not to the point (that's a good thing, to the point makes for a very boring story), but danced around the point as good authors do. Well done.
4/25/2004 c1 7neunundneunzig
I already read this. But now that I read it again, it seems very fairy-tail like, like it should be in a children's story book.
7neunundneunzigI already read this. But now that I read it again, it seems very fairy-tail like, like it should be in a children's story book.
4/25/2004 c1 mary
very thought provocking. sad, but the best are always sad unforntualey.good job in showing the story and not just telling it. i enjoyed it
very thought provocking. sad, but the best are always sad unforntualey.good job in showing the story and not just telling it. i enjoyed it
4/25/2004 c1 Christi
Nice work! Really impressive...you should keep writing short stories, and maybe develop this short story into something longer.
Nice work! Really impressive...you should keep writing short stories, and maybe develop this short story into something longer.
4/25/2004 c1 vern
It needs to be lengthened...it's good, just too short.
It needs to be lengthened...it's good, just too short.
4/25/2004 c1 Fina
wow this is really symbolic..and it shows deep thought...and i liked how the women was kind of in a daze of love until she found out her lover had another woman..
wow this is really symbolic..and it shows deep thought...and i liked how the women was kind of in a daze of love until she found out her lover had another woman..