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1/6/2005 c1 HideAwayFairy
I don't know if I'm reading this right, but it sounds like a heart without love is haunted by things of the past and wants them to return. I'm wrong but, yeah it's beautiful
9/13/2004 c1 lime-girl
Great haiku! Excellent descriptions and I like how you end it on a question.
*lime-girl*
8/25/2004 c1 59Unfairy
ah the feeling of the lingering, nice
8/5/2004 c1 168SeaVoi
Oh, Sean likes this.
6/23/2004 c1 127godawful teen-angst poetry
Wow.
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That was really good. Are you on my favorites list? You should be...
~lyv
6/17/2004 c1 18Debbirooni
I like the imagery in this one... but I'm kind of lost. I like the idea to this poem, and it's like a person who you can never get over, that you're obsessed with, and basically they haunt you every moment your awake and asleep. I don't get the part where it says "Images of once was flash"... perhaps it was a typo? or my eyes are bugging out... I dunno...
Anyways, great job on this poem... nice imagery.
5/23/2004 c1 76CoolBeans18s
Hauntingly beautiful
4/28/2004 c1 A Beautiful Nightmare
"Endless... Void... Everywhere... haunt" the words you used were perfectly put together... exellently done again...
4/26/2004 c1 Hail the Warrior
Eerie, but cool, thanks for reviewing Horizons Broken.
HtW
4/26/2004 c1 210Kelpylion
hm...haunting. I especially like 'flowers denied of water.' tingly images.
4/26/2004 c1 612simpleplan13
oh yea ive had that feeling... i can relate... very nciely written i like the flower thing
4/26/2004 c1 LZee
Why, why, WHY?
*cries isanely*
4/26/2004 c1 Stephen Fierce Publications
Cool. It all flows very nicely.
4/26/2004 c1 57teh tarik
*Flowers denied of water* is a great comparison, a very deep line. Great haiku, very emotional.
4/25/2004 c1 191nine iron
Envy is overflowing because of the haiku talent, I hope I can write ones like that soon, if ever. I love the questions asked and Thanks for mentioning me in you bio :)
Nine Iron

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