for day dream6/11/2004 c1 
8Frederick Waters
I'm going to ask this as a bit of a question to you Floorcollision, and please respond to me somehow so that I can learn more about poetry (or just see if I am on the right track).
Is the hyphen between "Dream-Me" and "Dream-You" suppose to mean something like, when I have a dream of myself it is... and when I have a dream of you... If that is what you meant than I got this one of my first read (yeah, for me!), if not I'd like to understand it (doh, for me!). Thanks
8Frederick WatersI'm going to ask this as a bit of a question to you Floorcollision, and please respond to me somehow so that I can learn more about poetry (or just see if I am on the right track).
Is the hyphen between "Dream-Me" and "Dream-You" suppose to mean something like, when I have a dream of myself it is... and when I have a dream of you... If that is what you meant than I got this one of my first read (yeah, for me!), if not I'd like to understand it (doh, for me!). Thanks
4/28/2004 c1 8Tempest Breeze
good job again. you think of dreams kind of like i do especially how you termed the second line. my poem dreams embrace has something almost the same as the second line in it
8Tempest Breezegood job again. you think of dreams kind of like i do especially how you termed the second line. my poem dreams embrace has something almost the same as the second line in it
4/27/2004 c1 5Eagle Seance
{mumbles} why didn't u make it longer? i really liked it! especially the second and the last... well the whole thing really!
5Eagle Seance{mumbles} why didn't u make it longer? i really liked it! especially the second and the last... well the whole thing really!