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2/6/2007 c3 612simpleplan13
lol... that was cute.. i liked it
1/21/2006 c1 monkey
wow... i could actually tell who most of these are... amazing. who's the fuchsia one & the young-looking one & the one that's not yours? (u can e-mail me if u want instead of posting it)
4/29/2005 c2 simpleplan13
i lvoe this collection... how you describe yourself through the clothing,... keep them coming
4/27/2004 c1 simpleplan13
nice descriptions... i love the last stanza... its awesome
4/26/2004 c1 33Blondeggman
whoa lindsay...im surprised how ppl can make a poem out of n e thing. are u sure this doesnt have n e hidden meanings? lol. eventho i just asked u cause u r sitting right next to me as of now lol. bye!
4/26/2004 c1 tari-morielen
This is great, it really made me smile. It is light hearted and a pleasure to read. one thing though - you repeat the phrase 'draws attention to itself' which weakens the poem as it makes it seem more amateurish (because it makes it seem like you couldnt find something else to say)
Otherwise, i thought it was fantastic. I will be looking for some more of your writing !
4/26/2004 c1 9Corky Riviera
Yoko shares your pain, but she isn't strong enough to throw out those old coats in her closet. Hahaha, very cute!

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