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5/17/2004 c1 19Crudely drawn pigeon
I think the rhyming scheme is really clever, good job, people need to be aware of the dangers so thanks for looking out. *CDP*
5/11/2004 c1 Tameron Millicent
I especially love the last two lines and 'These fucking blood-stained sheets
Are just another déjà vu.' In my opinion this is the perfect length, I like it a lot. ^^;
4/27/2004 c1 105KT-Me
Wow...This is amazing...And you don't need to make it any longer...It's perfect the way it is...You really captivate the reader...And I can really relate...Wow...
4/27/2004 c1 37Moarte in Extaz
OMG! This is great! Love the way it rythmed, flowed perfectly. You should make it longer! Keep it up and never stop! Oh...just wondering. what happened to your other name?
4/26/2004 c1 BubbleHead
That's so sad...beautiful poem.
4/26/2004 c1 53emrldeyedragon
I like it, it could be longer though. Good job!

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