for A Foreign Tune4/20/2005 c1 
11Cloud Burst
wow, this was beautiful! im not sure who u mean by mynah though.. a person?great job!
11Cloud Burstwow, this was beautiful! im not sure who u mean by mynah though.. a person?great job!
4/26/2004 c1 219Matthew James Current
O_o Cool. The imagery is very cool and at a couple instances seems almost.. sexual. In any case I really enjoyed reading this poem. The flow seems a bit disrupted at times due to how you broke up the poem. Good use of vocabulary, too. Well done!
219Matthew James CurrentO_o Cool. The imagery is very cool and at a couple instances seems almost.. sexual. In any case I really enjoyed reading this poem. The flow seems a bit disrupted at times due to how you broke up the poem. Good use of vocabulary, too. Well done!