for dry asphalt10/12/2004 c1 
6Fallen Too Far
This is really beautiful, the description is fantasic, as though the whole thing is alive in the moment you read it. I'd love to read more of this, update soon.
6Fallen Too FarThis is really beautiful, the description is fantasic, as though the whole thing is alive in the moment you read it. I'd love to read more of this, update soon.
7/24/2004 c1 Mlle Sara
hey! been a long time since i reviewed anything of yours, so I thought I'd have a big reviewing marathon today =P Oh god, I love this, you're far superior than me at writing. I liked how the last line, summed up most of the chapter. UPDATE! Where have you gone? why aren't you writing *searches for you* ciao, babydoll
*the one and only sara*
hey! been a long time since i reviewed anything of yours, so I thought I'd have a big reviewing marathon today =P Oh god, I love this, you're far superior than me at writing. I liked how the last line, summed up most of the chapter. UPDATE! Where have you gone? why aren't you writing *searches for you* ciao, babydoll
*the one and only sara*
6/11/2004 c1 17frantic writer
i love it. it makes me feel inspired. the descriptiveness is so beautiful in a fransesca lia block kinda way.
17frantic writeri love it. it makes me feel inspired. the descriptiveness is so beautiful in a fransesca lia block kinda way.
6/8/2004 c1 wazawaisuru
Wow, that was just...gorgeous. The way you make your descriptions and choose your words is absolutely brilliant. Beautiful piece of writing you have here^_^!
Wow, that was just...gorgeous. The way you make your descriptions and choose your words is absolutely brilliant. Beautiful piece of writing you have here^_^!