Just In
for Sounds of Nature

2/16/2005 c1 1o0oAnnie
Beautiful poem...I could hear the sounds as you were describing them..I loved the line "The sound of the wind gently caressing the leaves on the trees." brilliant :) keep writing!
1/13/2005 c1 36Silentwriter9
i like it but you don't need the "the sound of..." the title is 'The Sounds of Nature' we know it is about sound we don't need to be told each time it overkills the theme of the poem.

i like the thoughts with this poem it is a nice, calming theme.

*Silent Writer*
1/12/2005 c1 16Islandbreeze
Nice poem- I like the line about the stream the best.
11/22/2004 c1 dragongate
Cool, I'd like it more if it were longer though, but that's no big deal. I like the line about the wind best. Keep up the writing, you're really good.
7/18/2004 c1 10Rebecca Kelsey
Very cool poem.
7/8/2004 c1 23confusionlove
Hi, I finally stopped being lazy and am looking at your stuff after you reviewed me. This is a nice poem but what I suggest changing is from line 2, maybe replace "an occasional far off bark of a dog" with something like, "the sporadic distant bark" or something. "an occassional far off" is a lot of syllables.
Um, let's see, what else... you used it's instead of its, but that's no big deal... I like the line about the water the most. All the words in it are well-chosen.
Thanks for all the reviews :)
6/25/2004 c1 10tarakatty
this is pretty. I like you peotry, you should write more
6/23/2004 c1 14Mischievous Storm
Nice...but you could add other verses (maybe using the other 4 senses) to make it longer.
5/4/2004 c1 40Twinkletoes the Irish Ninja
It was very good and I love deers! They're so cute!
4/29/2004 c1 5Eagle Seance
I really like it. The only thing is, i would've liked it even more if u wrote more verses. Anyway, it's great as is.
4/27/2004 c1 71Sang Yu Nung
Beautiful imagery- I loved it! (I only wish it were longer ^_~) But that means i'll just have to read more of your work! Keep it up

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service