5/31/2004 c1 The spaces between the words
You said its an out? I see an opening- The words let everybody see whats below the skin, the scab, the disease- A festering wound needs to be cleaned before it can heal, but you keep looking at it with dirty hands and the disease keeps coming up again- you let it there it will eat you up, you pick it open and it doesn't stop- open yourself up with clean hands.
You have a true power of words. This power is hard to come across these days. You let everything flow into your reader's head and Make them think.
You said its an out? I see an opening- The words let everybody see whats below the skin, the scab, the disease- A festering wound needs to be cleaned before it can heal, but you keep looking at it with dirty hands and the disease keeps coming up again- you let it there it will eat you up, you pick it open and it doesn't stop- open yourself up with clean hands.
You have a true power of words. This power is hard to come across these days. You let everything flow into your reader's head and Make them think.
4/30/2004 c1 ash
Loved it, this was deep and very moving. i can totally relate, though you expressed it better than i could ever hope to do myself. Keep up the good work!
Loved it, this was deep and very moving. i can totally relate, though you expressed it better than i could ever hope to do myself. Keep up the good work!
4/28/2004 c1 Kat
great,deep,so true.
great,deep,so true.
4/28/2004 c1 17Jessica Concord
Wow, this is so amazing and powerful and . . . wrenching to read. I personally do not cut myself but I can relate to the feelings you described in the first paragraph. This is exceptional writing, and I hope you never stop putting your words out there for others to read—we'll all be the better for it.
Wow, this is so amazing and powerful and . . . wrenching to read. I personally do not cut myself but I can relate to the feelings you described in the first paragraph. This is exceptional writing, and I hope you never stop putting your words out there for others to read—we'll all be the better for it.