for Disease6/13/2005 c1 
40Moosher
I love this poem. You used such beautiful words to express your feelings, and you have a great style of writing.. Keep up the good work, and thank you so much for reviewing my poem, I apreciate it greatly..Much love, Meme
40MoosherI love this poem. You used such beautiful words to express your feelings, and you have a great style of writing.. Keep up the good work, and thank you so much for reviewing my poem, I apreciate it greatly..Much love, Meme
2/2/2005 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
i like the title gives a new perspective to love and what it really is.
3Cry Tears of Darknessi like the title gives a new perspective to love and what it really is.
7/13/2004 c1 5Cannibalistic Peach
Been going down the list of your poems and only a few allow me to reveiw...
I think your title is better off Disease cause I sure can't think of anything.
But the meaning of the poem can be so true to certain people. Well done
Kudos!
Question..How do you keep the poem from having the big spaces between lines?
5Cannibalistic PeachBeen going down the list of your poems and only a few allow me to reveiw...
I think your title is better off Disease cause I sure can't think of anything.
But the meaning of the poem can be so true to certain people. Well done
Kudos!
Question..How do you keep the poem from having the big spaces between lines?
7/11/2004 c1 53Head or Tales
Hey,
I don't think you need the change the title. I like your description of love, it's so true. Maybe you would like the song 'Love is Only a Feeling' by the Darkness.
KIX
Ayda
PS: Thanks for reviewing my work!
53Head or TalesHey,
I don't think you need the change the title. I like your description of love, it's so true. Maybe you would like the song 'Love is Only a Feeling' by the Darkness.
KIX
Ayda
PS: Thanks for reviewing my work!
7/6/2004 c1 15Crescent Angel
Love can be like that, but yet without love where would human kind be? You could call it a Disease, for most everyone has it. Let's just hope the love people have is the good love, not the bad.
15Crescent AngelLove can be like that, but yet without love where would human kind be? You could call it a Disease, for most everyone has it. Let's just hope the love people have is the good love, not the bad.
7/3/2004 c1 137Ria Mala
We have similar views on this subject. I've written many-a-poem about this. I like the way yours is short and to the point though.
137Ria MalaWe have similar views on this subject. I've written many-a-poem about this. I like the way yours is short and to the point though.
5/24/2004 c1 catseyeview
This is really good, what about "Fevers" or something to do with a drug...something maybe you inflict on yourself, drugs are usually in that arena.
This is really good, what about "Fevers" or something to do with a drug...something maybe you inflict on yourself, drugs are usually in that arena.
5/24/2004 c1 9BluDolphinFan22
Love doesn't always end, when a person finds true love then it will keep on going on.
~mandi~
9BluDolphinFan22Love doesn't always end, when a person finds true love then it will keep on going on.
~mandi~
5/15/2004 c1 132mizu no kokoro
wow, very nicely done! and i think the title fits quite well^^ keep it up~
132mizu no kokorowow, very nicely done! and i think the title fits quite well^^ keep it up~