for Music Lessons6/7/2004 c1 
7spicymulatta
Clever. I'm so jealous of your poetry talent, lol.
Thanks for the critiques. I really appreciate the one on the poem, and yeah, that was for a vocab quiz. lol I got extra credit.
7spicymulattaClever. I'm so jealous of your poetry talent, lol.
Thanks for the critiques. I really appreciate the one on the poem, and yeah, that was for a vocab quiz. lol I got extra credit.
6/5/2004 c1 210Kelpylion
Very Suessical. Um...will you kill me if I say it made me laugh? There are so many poems on here about false friends, etc, but this one...it knows how simple the situation is, or if it's not, deals with it straightforwardly, and with some sense of humour. Yum. And I love the meter here.
210KelpylionVery Suessical. Um...will you kill me if I say it made me laugh? There are so many poems on here about false friends, etc, but this one...it knows how simple the situation is, or if it's not, deals with it straightforwardly, and with some sense of humour. Yum. And I love the meter here.