
5/17/2004 c1
7spicymulatta
That's really nicely done. The rhyming works, unlike lots of other poems people write where it seems forced. Good job.
Hey, I know this is annoying, but if you wouldn't mind, check some of my work out and review it. I would appreciate it. Just if you want to, though. Don't feel like you have to.

That's really nicely done. The rhyming works, unlike lots of other poems people write where it seems forced. Good job.
Hey, I know this is annoying, but if you wouldn't mind, check some of my work out and review it. I would appreciate it. Just if you want to, though. Don't feel like you have to.
5/3/2004 c1
26Sweet Calamity
Very, very true! Liars are both the spider and the fly. :) I like how you blended the two quotes - of course. Excellent!

Very, very true! Liars are both the spider and the fly. :) I like how you blended the two quotes - of course. Excellent!