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5/17/2004 c1 7spicymulatta
That's really nicely done. The rhyming works, unlike lots of other poems people write where it seems forced. Good job.
Hey, I know this is annoying, but if you wouldn't mind, check some of my work out and review it. I would appreciate it. Just if you want to, though. Don't feel like you have to.
5/15/2004 c1 138Lina Inverse
You have some good imagery, but the rhyme sounds very forced.
5/3/2004 c1 26Sweet Calamity
Very, very true! Liars are both the spider and the fly. :) I like how you blended the two quotes - of course. Excellent!
4/29/2004 c1 191nine iron
Sort of like my "New Beginning" Poem, has the same idea. Yours is done much better though, it has major differences though. It is well written and very readable. Goof luck in all your works
Nine Iron

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