
9/11/2005 c1
38CarpeDiem28
I really like this poem as well. Made a very good point. I like the ending. the "nine lives" part was very creative.

I really like this poem as well. Made a very good point. I like the ending. the "nine lives" part was very creative.
4/17/2005 c1
116loversdream17
wow. good job again keep up the good work love always and forever mandi.

wow. good job again keep up the good work love always and forever mandi.
12/29/2004 c1
858Anna178
Love the lines: "I've got my wings, but no where to fly" beautiful poem.ANNA

Love the lines: "I've got my wings, but no where to fly" beautiful poem.ANNA
5/15/2004 c1
30a e i o u and sometimes y
That was really fun and interesting to read, and I love the point you were expressing. I especially love the ending. Great job!

That was really fun and interesting to read, and I love the point you were expressing. I especially love the ending. Great job!
5/13/2004 c1
76CoolBeans18s
What an interesting concept! This is a true masterpiece - I love your style!
~ CoolBeans18s

What an interesting concept! This is a true masterpiece - I love your style!
~ CoolBeans18s
5/3/2004 c1
144Infinite Smiles
Iespecially love the bit about the nine lives at the end..Love the concept.

Iespecially love the bit about the nine lives at the end..Love the concept.
4/29/2004 c1 simpleplan13
i liek it... ncie rhyming...
i liek it... ncie rhyming...