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11Never Knows Best
Hahahaq, funny chapter.WHat a neat freak. Although...I think a bathroom like that would drive even ME into a cleaning frenzy.~Lee
11Never Knows BestHahahaq, funny chapter.WHat a neat freak. Although...I think a bathroom like that would drive even ME into a cleaning frenzy.~Lee
5/4/2005 c1 aj
luved it! keep writing!
luved it! keep writing!
2/27/2005 c7 7Sunne
Dude update! I love this. Jess now has a home...I'm so glad :) Please update soon.
~~Sunne~~
7SunneDude update! I love this. Jess now has a home...I'm so glad :) Please update soon.
~~Sunne~~
11/20/2004 c7 Quantum
I'm so glad you've continued. Thought you'd given up on this story. Which would have been a shame, really.I like how you made Jessica this seemingly strong persona teetering on the edge of collapse and then pushed her over the edge with that accident. Her psychadelic reactions after being drugged - giving in to the weepy emotions and all - is very human. She's no little miss perfect after all.She is the most defined character. Am hoping you'll be able to flesh out the guys as much as you've breathed life into your main character.Here's looking to what new life awaits Jess in Chapt 8.
I'm so glad you've continued. Thought you'd given up on this story. Which would have been a shame, really.I like how you made Jessica this seemingly strong persona teetering on the edge of collapse and then pushed her over the edge with that accident. Her psychadelic reactions after being drugged - giving in to the weepy emotions and all - is very human. She's no little miss perfect after all.She is the most defined character. Am hoping you'll be able to flesh out the guys as much as you've breathed life into your main character.Here's looking to what new life awaits Jess in Chapt 8.
11/10/2004 c7 Kaiyu Onibaba
Very interesting! That was a cute chapter, not to menton funny. I wonder what will happen with Jessica...
Very interesting! That was a cute chapter, not to menton funny. I wonder what will happen with Jessica...
11/10/2004 c7 2Dream Fox
sweet! this is definately a nice sappy story, just the kind of thing i was in the mood for! please continue soon!
2Dream Foxsweet! this is definately a nice sappy story, just the kind of thing i was in the mood for! please continue soon!
9/5/2004 c6 Dream Fox
Ai, this is looking so cool! I like this story a lot, and now it looks like she's on her way to finally gaining some friends! YAY!
Ai, this is looking so cool! I like this story a lot, and now it looks like she's on her way to finally gaining some friends! YAY!
8/21/2004 c6 4xTamx
Great story! Its weird, cos I've never really thought about how being homeless like that. Now that I think about it its pretty easy to get homeless.. and not easy to stop being homeless. lol well anyways amazing story mate! Update asap!
4xTamxGreat story! Its weird, cos I've never really thought about how being homeless like that. Now that I think about it its pretty easy to get homeless.. and not easy to stop being homeless. lol well anyways amazing story mate! Update asap!
8/20/2004 c6 11Never Knows Best
And here I was thinking that things couldn't get much worse for the poor girl. Guess I was wrong. Okay...broken arm, possible concussion...that's not too bad is it. Oh yay, and there's no such thing as free health care int eh States is there? I don't know if the irony is funny or...well, not funny.
~NKB~
11Never Knows BestAnd here I was thinking that things couldn't get much worse for the poor girl. Guess I was wrong. Okay...broken arm, possible concussion...that's not too bad is it. Oh yay, and there's no such thing as free health care int eh States is there? I don't know if the irony is funny or...well, not funny.
~NKB~
8/6/2004 c5 Never Knows Best
Man, that just plain sucks. Seriously. If I were her I'd contemplate murder. Possibly using the evil bitch-woman nazi boos of hers...or even the annoying police officer as my victim. I'd bury them under my pool...except if I were her I wouldn't have a pool. In fact, I wouldn't even have a place to stay. Which brings us back to the beginning of...that just plain sucks.
~Lee~
Man, that just plain sucks. Seriously. If I were her I'd contemplate murder. Possibly using the evil bitch-woman nazi boos of hers...or even the annoying police officer as my victim. I'd bury them under my pool...except if I were her I wouldn't have a pool. In fact, I wouldn't even have a place to stay. Which brings us back to the beginning of...that just plain sucks.
~Lee~