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5/30/2004 c3 Ever-White Rose
no dont stop there! *frantically clicks the place where the new chapter should be* ahh! AHH! its not there!
WRITE IT!
lol, its good so far.
5/30/2004 c3 HippieHebe
Being stubborn is fun. Well i still like James i normally like the bad ones anyway. Catherine is starting sound more intresting. And now i am starting to think that James is a Vampire.
5/28/2004 c2 HippieHebe
Well i like James. It's a shame Mr. Delcote doesn't. The room went cold huh? I hope he's a vampire. But rooms don't normally get cold when Vampires enter. Keep it up.
5/1/2004 c1 4Falkner
The story itself seems to move along quite well; you really are able to get a feel for Catherine. Maybe your character descriptions could be eased into the story a little more. There were a few typos here and there, nothing major, and other than that it really does look promising. I like the storyline. Keep it up.
4/30/2004 c1 36MoonLitDemon
You're right, your character descriptions need a bit of work. You got the words "there" and "their" mixed up, along with "read" and "red." Other than that, though, it was a nice introduction. Loved the flashbacks.
Update soon.
Happy Hunting,
MOONLITDEMON

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