for Pushed4/30/2004 c1 
52FAKEromances
oh wow. scary. i loved the ending...SO unexpected. only suggestion: maybe you could add a few more details about what henry's feeling at the end. why he was driven to killing his father, the desperation he felt...etc. but all in all, i loved the way you used the language. nice.
52FAKEromancesoh wow. scary. i loved the ending...SO unexpected. only suggestion: maybe you could add a few more details about what henry's feeling at the end. why he was driven to killing his father, the desperation he felt...etc. but all in all, i loved the way you used the language. nice.