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6The Crazy Talk Kid
I like this story too, interesting, albeit heartless, concept. I have a question though, how are these warriors going to fight if they don't have any weapons? Kdh
6The Crazy Talk KidI like this story too, interesting, albeit heartless, concept. I have a question though, how are these warriors going to fight if they don't have any weapons? Kdh
5/1/2004 c1 2Kevin Noonan
I am very intriged by this story. Keep it up. Would you please read and review some of my stories?
2Kevin NoonanI am very intriged by this story. Keep it up. Would you please read and review some of my stories?
5/1/2004 c1 16Calvin Fitzgerald
Okay not a bad premise judging by your summary but this story definatly needs a little work. First of all the grammer is troubling, a lot of stupid, easy to fix mistakes are in this document and they distract from the flow of the story. The dialogue isn't bad but half the time I can't distinguish between the two characters because they are speaking in the same 'voice'. As for the plot you might want to add a twist to the alien invasion, its kind of overdone.
Calvin Fitzgerald
16Calvin FitzgeraldOkay not a bad premise judging by your summary but this story definatly needs a little work. First of all the grammer is troubling, a lot of stupid, easy to fix mistakes are in this document and they distract from the flow of the story. The dialogue isn't bad but half the time I can't distinguish between the two characters because they are speaking in the same 'voice'. As for the plot you might want to add a twist to the alien invasion, its kind of overdone.
Calvin Fitzgerald