for Impossibility2/20/2005 c1 
4Rio Madeira
(sigh) You have no idea how true this is. I've been mentally saying that to a guy for a year and a half, and guess what? We're STILL not dating. Go figure. Anyhoo, thanks for this awesome poem and the review, although I'm not sure if I'm headed for journalism or creative writing . . . whatever it is, I'll keep you posted.
4Rio Madeira(sigh) You have no idea how true this is. I've been mentally saying that to a guy for a year and a half, and guess what? We're STILL not dating. Go figure. Anyhoo, thanks for this awesome poem and the review, although I'm not sure if I'm headed for journalism or creative writing . . . whatever it is, I'll keep you posted.
1/10/2005 c1 Stargate4003
Ah! A "connected Haiku". A series of haiku's strung together to make one large poem.Very nice.
Ah! A "connected Haiku". A series of haiku's strung together to make one large poem.Very nice.
8/31/2004 c1 62lifescrewsusall
Very nicely structured...It all builds up to the final line. I especially like:
"This world, it is like us
Together or apart."
Very good!
62lifescrewsusallVery nicely structured...It all builds up to the final line. I especially like:
"This world, it is like us
Together or apart."
Very good!
6/11/2004 c1 131LiL Angel with Wings
Hey this is really good. Ya know though, sometimes things seem hard to do, like to get with someone, but sometimes the things that are hard to achieve are that much more important to. Just because something is hard doesn't mean you shouldn't keep trying. But anyways...good job. And thanks for adding me to your favs. Please r & r more when you get the chance! Good job with this and keep it up!
LiL Angel with Wings
~ Dreamer to Fly ~
131LiL Angel with WingsHey this is really good. Ya know though, sometimes things seem hard to do, like to get with someone, but sometimes the things that are hard to achieve are that much more important to. Just because something is hard doesn't mean you shouldn't keep trying. But anyways...good job. And thanks for adding me to your favs. Please r & r more when you get the chance! Good job with this and keep it up!
LiL Angel with Wings
~ Dreamer to Fly ~
5/4/2004 c1 121Seeker of the Way
Vrey cool!
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I throught this one change for some reason, feel free NOT use it, K?
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Instead of "And yet I use none/Online, telephone" since you already used "online" above why not use this instead:
"Choose to use neither/copper or cable"
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good work!
121Seeker of the WayVrey cool!
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I throught this one change for some reason, feel free NOT use it, K?
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Instead of "And yet I use none/Online, telephone" since you already used "online" above why not use this instead:
"Choose to use neither/copper or cable"
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good work!