for Joker Man9/18/2004 c1 
1Romyromy
I love this poem. It reminds me of the circus. . . Definitely going on my favs list.
1RomyromyI love this poem. It reminds me of the circus. . . Definitely going on my favs list.
6/9/2004 c1 47Anjeni Windsinger
I had a bouncy rhythm going around in my head, which I find is appropriate for the Joker Man. Very interesting idea, taking something that's reminiscent of a clown (I absolutely hate clowns; they're freaky) and applying a bit of angst and remorse to him. Weird, but I kept picturing the guy from Batman... the Riddler, was it? Meh, whatever. Very good write!
47Anjeni WindsingerI had a bouncy rhythm going around in my head, which I find is appropriate for the Joker Man. Very interesting idea, taking something that's reminiscent of a clown (I absolutely hate clowns; they're freaky) and applying a bit of angst and remorse to him. Weird, but I kept picturing the guy from Batman... the Riddler, was it? Meh, whatever. Very good write!
6/4/2004 c1 me10
very interesting poem (sorry to use the word interesting- my vocabulary sucks at the moment) sort of feels happy and sad, actually the joker sort of made me thinnk of a clown..ugh im getting off the point arent i? im sorry. welldone- its an excellent poem!
very interesting poem (sorry to use the word interesting- my vocabulary sucks at the moment) sort of feels happy and sad, actually the joker sort of made me thinnk of a clown..ugh im getting off the point arent i? im sorry. welldone- its an excellent poem!
5/31/2004 c1 Claire
Not bad, not bad. I cracked a smile while reading it, was that your intent? :)
Not bad, not bad. I cracked a smile while reading it, was that your intent? :)
5/27/2004 c1 76CoolBeans18s
*jaw drops*
wow... wow... wow... man, this is _brilliant_. I can't even think of words to describe it! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful piece!
~ CoolBeans18s
76CoolBeans18s*jaw drops*
wow... wow... wow... man, this is _brilliant_. I can't even think of words to describe it! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful piece!
~ CoolBeans18s
5/8/2004 c1 74LordK
Wow... deep. I get it. That's cool. It embodies a lot. I feel like I can kinda relate. That was excellent.
74LordKWow... deep. I get it. That's cool. It embodies a lot. I feel like I can kinda relate. That was excellent.
5/7/2004 c1 82pippin tomson
I really like thie poem, amnd I think it has a lot of point. It certainly made me think.
So sorry havn't been here for ages, but I won't be able to spend v.much time on here, but I havn't forgoten your story, but should have more time now exams are over and not long till schools out.
sorry again,
pippin
82pippin tomsonI really like thie poem, amnd I think it has a lot of point. It certainly made me think.
So sorry havn't been here for ages, but I won't be able to spend v.much time on here, but I havn't forgoten your story, but should have more time now exams are over and not long till schools out.
sorry again,
pippin
5/2/2004 c1 34Wasted Postage
*wild applause* You're right, this is AWESOME! Definately one of my favorites. It reminds me of a song called "Sad Clown" by Jars of Clay.
I really can't put my finger on exactly what it is that makes this poem to so great. Maybe it is how original it is.
Brilliant beyond brilliant work, dear friend. You've really outdone yourself this time.
~*~AbunaiChikara
34Wasted Postage*wild applause* You're right, this is AWESOME! Definately one of my favorites. It reminds me of a song called "Sad Clown" by Jars of Clay.
I really can't put my finger on exactly what it is that makes this poem to so great. Maybe it is how original it is.
Brilliant beyond brilliant work, dear friend. You've really outdone yourself this time.
~*~AbunaiChikara