
6/24/2004 c1
11nacay
its good . i really don't know what to say to something like that i'll end up spending an hour on this review so just know i like it.

its good . i really don't know what to say to something like that i'll end up spending an hour on this review so just know i like it.
5/2/2004 c1
44tiger lily8
I like the very in-your-face tone of the poem. The facts are laid bare. and yet there is still a certain amount of questioning. Though perhaps the first line is supposed to be: Death isn't escapable instead of: Death is isn't escapable. A very cool poem.

I like the very in-your-face tone of the poem. The facts are laid bare. and yet there is still a certain amount of questioning. Though perhaps the first line is supposed to be: Death isn't escapable instead of: Death is isn't escapable. A very cool poem.