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11/2/2009 c1 6letyoursoultakeflight
Beautifully written :)
7/7/2005 c1 3The Proxy Ninja
The title made me smirk. I liked this piece very much. The mood made me feel a little empty and numb, because I could relate to it. And when poems appeal to emotions with strength and conviction, they're good poems. Even a passive one like this is powerful.
9/1/2004 c1 210Kelpylion
Ach, that was perfectly put. I'm going through a really long spell like that myself, and it's highly depressing. Or maybe I have cause and effect mixed up there?
5/2/2004 c1 121AmethystPisces
Very haunting and at the same time beautiful. I love the first and second paragraphs. I'm losing pieces of myself too.

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