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6/25/2004 c1 127Eirien
This is perfectly written, a wonderful poem. No word is superfluous, they all add to an overpowering effect. The imagery used to describe the cuts/ scars is very inventive, especially the "freshly dug graves". The last two linesn are a great climax to the poem, very effective.
5/8/2004 c1 A Beautiful Nightmare
The last line suprised me... and the the line "Like freshly dug graves" was very original... well done...

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