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3/8/2005 c1 40godsgurl
that's really awesome and very touching. i loved it. keep writing
6/18/2004 c1 74Letters to No One
I like how the last lines rymed until the very end. It makes the reality of how He is watching us so much more real. Wonderful job, my dear.
5/9/2004 c1 7Samurai101
^^ 'Nice, very nice, you can sit by me!' I admire people who can make words flow like this in a poem. It has a rhyme scheme! The ryhme scheme works! Amazing! Very Nicely done. -Did I spell ryhme and scheme right?-
5/3/2004 c1 9Holly Barrows
I liked your poem...God has to tell me to slow down a lot!

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