for Watch Me Dance6/18/2004 c1 
74Letters to No One
I like how the last lines rymed until the very end. It makes the reality of how He is watching us so much more real. Wonderful job, my dear.
74Letters to No OneI like how the last lines rymed until the very end. It makes the reality of how He is watching us so much more real. Wonderful job, my dear.
5/9/2004 c1 7Samurai101
^^ 'Nice, very nice, you can sit by me!' I admire people who can make words flow like this in a poem. It has a rhyme scheme! The ryhme scheme works! Amazing! Very Nicely done. -Did I spell ryhme and scheme right?-
7Samurai101^^ 'Nice, very nice, you can sit by me!' I admire people who can make words flow like this in a poem. It has a rhyme scheme! The ryhme scheme works! Amazing! Very Nicely done. -Did I spell ryhme and scheme right?-