10/28/2005 c1 15Getuie
This has such a sweet, sweet admosphere too it. There's a twinge of sadness for the lost, but such beauty, such hope, such grace... Really an awesome piece.
This has such a sweet, sweet admosphere too it. There's a twinge of sadness for the lost, but such beauty, such hope, such grace... Really an awesome piece.
5/17/2004 c1 yield4writers
That poem was quite lovely. You did a wonderful job of conveying emotion.
That poem was quite lovely. You did a wonderful job of conveying emotion.
5/5/2004 c1 Edraith
This is really beautiful, and the strength of faith that speaks from it, actually from everything you wrote, both poems and reviews, is simply amazing. I love the lyrical quality of this poem, the way it alternates imperatives, questions and reflections. It is so true, this life is only a passing shadow, and the real reality still lies before us ... Beautiful insights here.
This is really beautiful, and the strength of faith that speaks from it, actually from everything you wrote, both poems and reviews, is simply amazing. I love the lyrical quality of this poem, the way it alternates imperatives, questions and reflections. It is so true, this life is only a passing shadow, and the real reality still lies before us ... Beautiful insights here.