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for My Heart Hurts

6/21/2006 c1 38Master Shu
All wounds will heal even if they leave scars. I hope you feel better and good job on the poem.
9/18/2005 c1 5Firefly88
I like it! I can never get my poems to rhyme.
5/22/2005 c1 Clap Clap Raise Your Hands
i like this, the repetition works really well to help break up the different parts, i like the rhyme, it makes the poem flow really well but the sentances don't seem forced (like some people have to completely turn sentances around so that they rhyme but you don't seem to have done this, it seems natural) anyway, i like this, thanks for your review too, "blue berried" is from another song "what it is to touch", i kinda like that sort of thing but i can see why a lot of people wouldnt so i appreciate the comment, hope to have your opinion and suggestions on more work sometime, x weasel within x
11/12/2004 c1 Lalis
WOW! Loved this poem! You are very talanted.
6/6/2004 c1 Chibiheartdragon
Aw. I feel like this sometimes... so this is REALLY how you feel? ;-;
5/23/2004 c1 119AntiPleasure
I didn't really agree with the "admission fee" part, because I'm not a money grubbing person in this world, but m.. the rest of the world is lol good format on this as well, keep on writing.
Jenna xx

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