for The lost boy12/29/2004 c1 May
Hi Som! It's nice to see you write again. As for the poem, it's quite depressing, I have to say but the rhythm is really nice. The pain of losing a child is described beautifully in just only a few lines. I like it. ^^
Also, (don't take this as an insult, ok?) there're still some grammatical errors but don't worry they can be easily fixed. Good job, though. Hope to read more work from you soon.
~Your old friend,May
Hi Som! It's nice to see you write again. As for the poem, it's quite depressing, I have to say but the rhythm is really nice. The pain of losing a child is described beautifully in just only a few lines. I like it. ^^
Also, (don't take this as an insult, ok?) there're still some grammatical errors but don't worry they can be easily fixed. Good job, though. Hope to read more work from you soon.
~Your old friend,May
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