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5/16/2004 c1 14Crescendo
Though I liked it, there was something a bit vague about it. Until the last stanza, there was no mention of a reflection- that might help the reader a bit- and the 'come's in the last stanza would read better if they were in past tense. But on the whole, it was a good poem. Keep up the good work!

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