for The Attic1/9/2018 c23 Lila Dunmare
Interesting fiction. I wonder if there is a sequel ? But from the tone of the last lines I guess there won't be. Anyway, thanks for your work !
Interesting fiction. I wonder if there is a sequel ? But from the tone of the last lines I guess there won't be. Anyway, thanks for your work !
1/15/2016 c23 annayh44
God how much I love Iden Black~ I was expecting see more of him...Fayer is hillarious I like the guy but poor guy i hope he get over with Crush. Darwin he is my fav~ Aysel I love her and Really happy she got sexy Iden jee i want to see some kiss but got nothing haha still love them alot ~ Wes is second fav..love ya all
God how much I love Iden Black~ I was expecting see more of him...Fayer is hillarious I like the guy but poor guy i hope he get over with Crush. Darwin he is my fav~ Aysel I love her and Really happy she got sexy Iden jee i want to see some kiss but got nothing haha still love them alot ~ Wes is second fav..love ya all
10/4/2014 c23 
75AlysonSerenaStone
Wonderful story and very well written! I must say I really liked this a lot and enjoyed all of your characters, even the evil ones. Great work!
75AlysonSerenaStoneWonderful story and very well written! I must say I really liked this a lot and enjoyed all of your characters, even the evil ones. Great work!
9/26/2014 c16 AlysonSerenaStone
I really like Fayer and Aysel together. It's always a very entertaining read when they interact with one another.
I really like Fayer and Aysel together. It's always a very entertaining read when they interact with one another.
9/13/2014 c3 AlysonSerenaStone
I really do like what I've read so far! I haven't read too many vampire stories on here and it's been awhile since I've actually read a decent in general. The last bit in this chapter made me laugh for some reason...I don't know why. Anyway, great work so far!
I really do like what I've read so far! I haven't read too many vampire stories on here and it's been awhile since I've actually read a decent in general. The last bit in this chapter made me laugh for some reason...I don't know why. Anyway, great work so far!
8/2/2014 c19 1lost keys
Well I've got to agree with Iden. Aysel has really been a bitch I wont lie. Her attitude is horrible. I wish I cold like her but right now she doesn't deserve anyone's respect. I hope she learns that she's in the wrong. I get that things are hard but she should appreciate what Iden's doing for her.
1lost keysWell I've got to agree with Iden. Aysel has really been a bitch I wont lie. Her attitude is horrible. I wish I cold like her but right now she doesn't deserve anyone's respect. I hope she learns that she's in the wrong. I get that things are hard but she should appreciate what Iden's doing for her.
11/20/2013 c2 Guest
This is good! But if you ever get the chance, maybe you could separate the long paragraphs into shorter ones.
:D
This is good! But if you ever get the chance, maybe you could separate the long paragraphs into shorter ones.
:D
6/24/2013 c19 anonymus
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I could only imagine our reunion would be like.
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nai9ls
I'd been unable to any sleep:
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Alriughtm
Alright
calle dmy
called my
feeet
feet
overmy
over my
knew wello enough that I would fo to
wello-well
fo-go
I could only imagine our reunion would be like.
missing word
nai9ls
I'd been unable to any sleep:
missing word between "to" and "any"
6/24/2013 c22 anonymus
'base camp', it the small area around's Will's truck where a few slayers were discussing tactics could be called such.
it-in
and a missing at the end of the sentence
'base camp', it the small area around's Will's truck where a few slayers were discussing tactics could be called such.
it-in
and a missing at the end of the sentence
6/24/2013 c18 anonymus
climbing the and vanishing
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Justr because
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climbing the and vanishing
missing wored
Justr because
-Just
6/24/2013 c13 anonymus
family and I from two vampires
family and me from two vampires
family and I from two vampires
family and me from two vampires
6/24/2013 c12 anonymus
He leaned back lazily against my best and looked
"best"? was "bed" meant here?
I have to go find Aysel and risk
wrong person "Iden" instead of "Aysel"
He leaned back lazily against my best and looked
"best"? was "bed" meant here?
I have to go find Aysel and risk
wrong person "Iden" instead of "Aysel"
6/23/2013 c10 anonymus
blow to me side.
-blow to my side.
normally I a duel
normally in a duel
blow to me side.
-blow to my side.
normally I a duel
normally in a duel