for The Attic1/20/2007 c21 neverliveindoubt
It's been over a year, I love this story, you should update, and I can be persisitant if I wan to be
It's been over a year, I love this story, you should update, and I can be persisitant if I wan to be
1/16/2007 c21 
3KeyshaYess
holy crappers im going to have a heart attack. jesus christ this story is addicting. i love aysel, im completely like her. hah, plus im canadian =) then theres iden, man that guy seems hot. i seriously hope your the type of author that updates asap. or else im seriously gona have a mental breakdown and start immaging the rest on my own ;) okie well buhbye~
kiiwiishortcake
~your new reviewer
3KeyshaYessholy crappers im going to have a heart attack. jesus christ this story is addicting. i love aysel, im completely like her. hah, plus im canadian =) then theres iden, man that guy seems hot. i seriously hope your the type of author that updates asap. or else im seriously gona have a mental breakdown and start immaging the rest on my own ;) okie well buhbye~
kiiwiishortcake
~your new reviewer
1/11/2007 c21 17witchwriter
I just started reading your story a week ago and its so damn exciting. I can't wait for you to update, so update soon okay! Evil.
17witchwriterI just started reading your story a week ago and its so damn exciting. I can't wait for you to update, so update soon okay! Evil.
1/5/2007 c1 neverliveindoubt
Hun please update, I really like your story, and I'm not one to wait! I like updates every once in a while, but a year is pushing it! Please update!
Hun please update, I really like your story, and I'm not one to wait! I like updates every once in a while, but a year is pushing it! Please update!
12/28/2006 c1 2Suze-Booze
you know, i have first read this chapter a year ago, and today i got the idea to look for it again! i have to say that i rlly love it! please keep it up, it's incredibly good writing.
2Suze-Boozeyou know, i have first read this chapter a year ago, and today i got the idea to look for it again! i have to say that i rlly love it! please keep it up, it's incredibly good writing.
12/28/2006 c21 20OutcastedAngel
Nice going on your story. It had me completly raptured. Keep up the good work and looking forward to when you update.
20OutcastedAngelNice going on your story. It had me completly raptured. Keep up the good work and looking forward to when you update.
12/27/2006 c9 berryblitz
After reading this chapter all I have to say is "Shit, it's Francis." This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. No offense, but a lot of the other stories are cliched and overrated and half the people don't have any sense of story developement. I love your characters and the originality of the plot is intriguing. Looking forward to reading the rest of your story.
After reading this chapter all I have to say is "Shit, it's Francis." This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. No offense, but a lot of the other stories are cliched and overrated and half the people don't have any sense of story developement. I love your characters and the originality of the plot is intriguing. Looking forward to reading the rest of your story.
12/17/2006 c7 7sleepiness
This has got to be one of the funniest romantic stories I've ever read! The characters have fantastic personalities. Aysel is a completely original, witty and spunky girl. Iden is a hot, chivalrous and ultimately one of the coolest Vampires I've ever read about. Fayer is a somewhat lovable annoying idiot. I love this story more and more with each chapter!
Keep it up!
^_^
7sleepinessThis has got to be one of the funniest romantic stories I've ever read! The characters have fantastic personalities. Aysel is a completely original, witty and spunky girl. Iden is a hot, chivalrous and ultimately one of the coolest Vampires I've ever read about. Fayer is a somewhat lovable annoying idiot. I love this story more and more with each chapter!
Keep it up!
^_^
12/10/2006 c2 1Madcow13
This story has been a fun read so far and I like Aysel's character and I'm not surprised she's annoyed about being moved away from her home and she wants to take it all out on Scotland. Have to disagree with her no hot Scots thing though. ;) And I’m not surprised she got a good punch for telling the Scots their accent was unintelligible and drunken. She didn’t deserve to be beaten up though.
Also, being the nit picking Brit that I am, this annoyed me:
"I noted immediately that he was definitely not Scottish. He sounded more British to me."
Scots are British. So maybe if you said he sounded more Welsh/English instead.
But on the whole this is a good story. Though, I've got to ask: where in Scotland is this set? Because I think Aysel mentioned something about there being no lakes and mountains and there are definitely a load of them up north.
Anyhoo, I will definitely will be reading more of this as soon as I can.
1Madcow13This story has been a fun read so far and I like Aysel's character and I'm not surprised she's annoyed about being moved away from her home and she wants to take it all out on Scotland. Have to disagree with her no hot Scots thing though. ;) And I’m not surprised she got a good punch for telling the Scots their accent was unintelligible and drunken. She didn’t deserve to be beaten up though.
Also, being the nit picking Brit that I am, this annoyed me:
"I noted immediately that he was definitely not Scottish. He sounded more British to me."
Scots are British. So maybe if you said he sounded more Welsh/English instead.
But on the whole this is a good story. Though, I've got to ask: where in Scotland is this set? Because I think Aysel mentioned something about there being no lakes and mountains and there are definitely a load of them up north.
Anyhoo, I will definitely will be reading more of this as soon as I can.