for The Attic11/15/2012 c3 S. A. Arkenburgh
So, yeah, this story...totally awesome! Great job, and I'm sorry I haven't seen it before to review it and all of it's glory!
So, yeah, this story...totally awesome! Great job, and I'm sorry I haven't seen it before to review it and all of it's glory!
11/3/2012 c2 
4Alex Willow
it's a brilliant story but it's hard to remember your talking about Scotland with your use of word eg. Pants and Automobile. Try using the english word automobile Car
Pants Trousers
4Alex Willowit's a brilliant story but it's hard to remember your talking about Scotland with your use of word eg. Pants and Automobile. Try using the english word automobile Car
Pants Trousers
8/8/2012 c23 2Seranade
Loved it! A job well done! I have never liked vampire stories, but I'm starting to change my mind, thanks to you!
Brilliant story! Don't stop writing!
2SeranadeLoved it! A job well done! I have never liked vampire stories, but I'm starting to change my mind, thanks to you!
Brilliant story! Don't stop writing!
6/2/2012 c23 4Nyx'sReincarnation
Your story was interesting. I like how nobody was perfect; everyone got injured or hurt in some way. It makes the story more realistic.
Keep up the great work!
Tarah xXx
4Nyx'sReincarnationYour story was interesting. I like how nobody was perfect; everyone got injured or hurt in some way. It makes the story more realistic.
Keep up the great work!
Tarah xXx
4/26/2012 c1 MilkyWaySora
This story is sounding really good! I love the depth you pout into the characters already. Aysel is awesome!
This story is sounding really good! I love the depth you pout into the characters already. Aysel is awesome!
9/15/2011 c23 ffh
this story is absolutly brilliant ! and i who thougth that i was sick of vamp stories.. i was sort of rooting for fayer, but iden was totally my second choice ;) it's 3 am now, so I have to go to bed.. but i'm starting on the sequal followed by the rest of your stories first chance i get !
this story is absolutly brilliant ! and i who thougth that i was sick of vamp stories.. i was sort of rooting for fayer, but iden was totally my second choice ;) it's 3 am now, so I have to go to bed.. but i'm starting on the sequal followed by the rest of your stories first chance i get !
4/5/2011 c15 jane
Aysel is mean, and exactly like the people who bully her. I really dislike her for how she treats Fayer, just because he's nice to her and takes her bullshit doesn't mean she can treat him like crap...
Aysel is mean, and exactly like the people who bully her. I really dislike her for how she treats Fayer, just because he's nice to her and takes her bullshit doesn't mean she can treat him like crap...
2/6/2011 c23 1Silverfurred
This was a great story. I loved every minute of it and I was pretty satisfied with the ending. I only have one question: What was her families reaction to her being immortal? And is she okay knowing that she will have to watch all of them die?
1SilverfurredThis was a great story. I loved every minute of it and I was pretty satisfied with the ending. I only have one question: What was her families reaction to her being immortal? And is she okay knowing that she will have to watch all of them die?
12/2/2010 c1 Nymarra
excellent piece of writing ;-)
thnx for the music :-p stitches is great
excellent piece of writing ;-)
thnx for the music :-p stitches is great
8/14/2010 c15 9LolaRoll
gotta say, i absolutely LOVE this story. Youve done a great job writing it. Unfortunately when i started reading this story I was also watching Adam Lambert's music video of for your entertainment. Now i keep picturing Iden as Adam Lambert! lmao. it actually kinda reminds me of the vampire club.
9LolaRollgotta say, i absolutely LOVE this story. Youve done a great job writing it. Unfortunately when i started reading this story I was also watching Adam Lambert's music video of for your entertainment. Now i keep picturing Iden as Adam Lambert! lmao. it actually kinda reminds me of the vampire club.
8/7/2010 c3 5Mags2110
I hate that this story isn't that realistic(as far as fantasy goes), but it's quirky and for some reason, I find myself laughing and enjoying it.
I shall keep reading.
5Mags2110I hate that this story isn't that realistic(as far as fantasy goes), but it's quirky and for some reason, I find myself laughing and enjoying it.
I shall keep reading.
7/12/2010 c23 1Candescence
Good story. I thought that the ending was kind of rushed though. And, I didn't really get my closure for Fayer. I liked him and I thought Aysel was kind of out of character in this last chapter, near death experience or not. Anyways, congrats on completing thing
1CandescenceGood story. I thought that the ending was kind of rushed though. And, I didn't really get my closure for Fayer. I liked him and I thought Aysel was kind of out of character in this last chapter, near death experience or not. Anyways, congrats on completing thing
7/2/2010 c1 SASE1
You are a great writer, really, whitch is probably why you got so many reviews, but I am kind of irritated with unrevised work. You did very well on that too, the corrections, but in the first paragragh you mispelled to. You were supposed to spell it TOO. I am sorry if it seems as if I am a twit, but I just read a couple terrible ones and got frusterated. I asume that at least one of your 849 readers caugt that mistake, and I am hopeing you'll fix it. As I have said before, I had just read some terrible ones, so I appoligize if it seems as if I blame you for other peoples idiotcy. I also read about how people ignore flames, or insults, but I am hoping you are one to learn from critics. I sure hope so, because you're work looks intreaging and I refuse to read from self rightous morons. Good work neatherless.
You are a great writer, really, whitch is probably why you got so many reviews, but I am kind of irritated with unrevised work. You did very well on that too, the corrections, but in the first paragragh you mispelled to. You were supposed to spell it TOO. I am sorry if it seems as if I am a twit, but I just read a couple terrible ones and got frusterated. I asume that at least one of your 849 readers caugt that mistake, and I am hopeing you'll fix it. As I have said before, I had just read some terrible ones, so I appoligize if it seems as if I blame you for other peoples idiotcy. I also read about how people ignore flames, or insults, but I am hoping you are one to learn from critics. I sure hope so, because you're work looks intreaging and I refuse to read from self rightous morons. Good work neatherless.