
8/11/2004 c1
1k+Faithless Juliet
I ask for bread
give me a snake
-Love that.
You work is so fresh and modern yet at the same time has this timeless and whimsical feel to it. I love it all, keep up the good work.
Juliet.

I ask for bread
give me a snake
-Love that.
You work is so fresh and modern yet at the same time has this timeless and whimsical feel to it. I love it all, keep up the good work.
Juliet.
5/7/2004 c1
14auroratheauthor
Very graphic. Lots of imagery. It helped to contribute to my understanding of the narrator's pain in what they are going through. Nice work.

Very graphic. Lots of imagery. It helped to contribute to my understanding of the narrator's pain in what they are going through. Nice work.
5/7/2004 c1
18Forever Foreign
wow...you used so few words yet it was perfect..really incredible
care to lend me your expertice?

wow...you used so few words yet it was perfect..really incredible
care to lend me your expertice?