Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for Misanthropic

5/16/2004 c1 460Time To Change
Hey
Even though it was quite short i think you got the feelings across excellently. Love the 'scars so pale, cuts so deep' part. I can really relate to this.
ICT
if you have time pls look at my work
5/13/2004 c1 15Devi Lethe
I like the idea behind it, but the tone feels like rushed which takes away from the sinister nature of the lines themselves. Perhaps you should try writing in whole sentences instead of fragments to get the pacing I think you were going for?
5/11/2004 c1 37Moarte in Extaz
This was frekkin awesome! You write so good. It was really dark, I likeded it. Keep writing and never stop! ja'ne!
eien,
~:~ Melena Estaine ~:~
5/8/2004 c1 88breakme
Wow...this is quite dark. I expecially like the lines 'Numb to pain
And the world around'
Somehow I feel as if I can relate.
5/7/2004 c1 20AllThatMatters
felt like i wanted to kill myself before, this poem was nice and dark, jus what we like, anyway nice job on this and please review us back thanks, p.s why do fools fall in love?

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service