
5/8/2004 c1
121AmethystPisces
Very nice. You do have some spelling errors you may want to fix (favorite, thieving, against). A piece this good should not be riddled with flaws. Wonderful imagery.

Very nice. You do have some spelling errors you may want to fix (favorite, thieving, against). A piece this good should not be riddled with flaws. Wonderful imagery.