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10/27/2005 c1 Alisabeth
Excellent, the topic at hand hits me very close to home as I am still in high school and my mother has just passed away. Keep up the good work!
6/19/2005 c1 76eden is burning
Once again, genius Kat! I am upset that it is only one chapter :( Oh well, it was worth it and I'll get over it! Now i am off to read the next part of the trilogy... byee xx
4/1/2005 c1 arnoth
excellent plz continue. very good. adding it to favourites.
2/10/2005 c1 STORY LOVER
PLEASE,PLEASE, PLEASE WRIT MORE!I ABSOULUTLY LOVE THIS STORY!
12/14/2004 c1 Betta
I absolutly LOVE this story, it is one of the best things i have ever read, I hope you decide to wright more. PLEASE, PLEASE DO.

P.s. you can E-mail me.
7/19/2004 c1 David Stephen
This is fabulous LLNFT. I don't know if you did it on purpose - but the way you have made it very short and only one chapter - well its overwhelming. It reflects how she feels - this chapter is alone, and isolated. It is tense and the reader feels it - feels what is going on because of the shortness of the chapter. It also shows about the character. The story is wrote from first person - its as though its a recount or diary entry - and this one is short. It reflects how she feels - she cannot be bothered to write alot - because of the grief she feels. A terrific installment, and I loved the last sentence - describing her feelings, and the installment itself. :D faboulous. luv david x
7/17/2004 c1 1Slightly Bent Halo
i just realised this is only one chapter.. i was expecting it to be a few, like the first one..
still i should stop complaining coz i know theres a third part for me to read.. plus this is really good.. i love the last bit!
6/18/2004 c1 9Celeste Se'oir
Aww, that's so sad! Umm...umm...DOn't know what else to say...
Later,
~Ffuffy~
6/11/2004 c1 27Da Buffster
Wow. I have to say, wow. I can't remember if I reviewed the Past Tense one, but if I didn't same goes for that :P
Sorry this is a lil bit late, oh what the hell, it's only a month :P (aint that just the best smiley?)
Can you change it from one shot into something longer, showing how she heals, and how she moves on? I for one, would definetly read it :P
'I felt so alone and isolated. Tears welled in my hazel eyes as I thought I’ve only got Dad left. I’m just Daddy’s little girl.'
Beautiful line there, love it.
x
DB
5/19/2004 c1 28Diana Shore
This can't be the end? I like the continuation of the story, just wish there was more.
Good job.
5/14/2004 c1 5Eien Nemurigusa
Aww that is just so sad.
If I liked crying I would cry but that is so sad!
Very well done again time after time I say that.
Uh a sentance didn't quite feel right
it t'was
I closed my eyes tightly, willing the world to go away; but it didn’t.
You might want to put "...Willing for the world.." or "wanting" instead of 'willing'
That all I ahve to say but a very sweet/sad ending
5/14/2004 c1 64chicanerysmile
It's nice to see some more of this story. It's so sad. I'd like to hear more, please? B.
5/14/2004 c1 i wanna be a pastry
What? I can't believe only THREE people have reviewed this! It's great as always! I do hope you continue...:)
5/13/2004 c1 35Infinity Plus One
You have an articulate story there, well done. By looking at the picture, I'm assuming that you are paying for your account? I'm not sure. But I think that was a good, albeit short, but good story.
5/9/2004 c1 13Nat Rich
Good story. I liked it, but just a little confused if this is a story on its own or this is a prolouge..hmm PLEASE E-MAIL ME.
Nice job!
-Nat Rich
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