11/16/2009 c3 4Gilly Bean2
I love this story, as incomplete as it is! The descrpition is beautiful, and I truly want to know what happens to Meriel and Donagh. Your story makes me think of an Irish movie I saw once, The Secret of Roan Inish. Your description of the shore is so spot-on with my experiences in Ireland, and your writing makes me want to be back there right this minute! While it makes me a little sad that you never finished the story, or really got far into it, I still wanted to leave you a note thanking you for this blurb. It made me think about when I was in Ireland, walking along the Cliffs of Moher, or wandering aimlessly through County Wicklow and Glendalough. The pervasiveness of the sea, and the connection to it that many in Ireland feel shine through. Thank you, for reminding me of how much I love my Ireland, and the many happy memories I have had there. Cheers!

Gillian

12/30/2004 c3 10depressed-and-bored
Oh no it can't be. NOT DONAGH'S SHIP. Plz lry him be alive.I love this story.PLZ UPDATE

9/22/2004 c1 The Unbreakable
AWESOME! The imagery, the characters, the situation...it all was terrific! On the favorite authors list you go!

9/19/2004 c3 9Theadacia
Whoa! Good Job again, Pommie! It's really weird but between the two stories it reminds me of one of mine. I had a story that jumped back and forth too, but not quite as much as yours, only toward the end when it was taking place over 2 revloutionary battles. I'd like to read more, but I do have to say I think I liked your other book a bit better, I suppose because I can realate to it a bit more. Do you read Tamora Pierce? Cause for some reason your styles are alike, but maybe it's just me. Allot of authors are like her, I'm sure that some would say I'm like her too, but I don't think so. Again there are a few gramical things, but I can really see an improvment on that with your new book, so I can tell that you've been writing more. So where's the rest of the stuff! Donagh in that second chapter when they're dancing, I almost melted thinking about it. Good illistartions. But I'd like to edit this book as well. Devoted fan Thea. I'd love to hear from you and hear what you'd say about mine. I'm just dying to point a few wonderful things out for you, but it's kinda hard in the space that they gave to you, besides I don't remeber all of them. But that dance! Beautiful babes. loveya, your friend Thea

6/6/2004 c2 Lady Cyann
Oh my gosh! She's pregnant! I'm just glad that Meriel had Ena to help her through her dilemma. I sure hope that Donagh comes back soon, because Meriel obviously needs him. Another wonderful chapter, as the first was. The mood was very good, and I could picture each scene very nicely. Well done, and keep up the good work. Write on!
~LC~

5/25/2004 c3 4l. fayette
This is EXTREMELY good. I can't wait for more!
.:*Lady Fayette*:.

5/20/2004 c3 18Val Mora
You know, from the way he acts sometimes, I'm almost certain that you mean for Donagh to be a selkie. Is he?
I like your characters and I think the situation is believable. The flashbacks are very cleverly dated (and it's much appreciated), and your description is wonderful.
However, I sometimes feel like the characters - especially Ena and Meriel - don't act very mature at all. This may, perhaps, be because they aren't old enough to be mature, but think about how you might convey them as being more adult-like.

5/17/2004 c2 8Ravynne
This story is exceptionally well written. Your word choice is incredible and really does justice to your description in this piece. I'm adding this to my favorites list so that I may look out for updates.