for wish i had a gun8/23/2004 c1 
234The Moribund Marionette
Another good one.
Very good, I should say.
Anyway, try to fix your grammar, though. You had a lot of mistakes in your other one (about anorexia), and a few in this one as well.
Wonderful and flowing.
~Writer of Darkness~
234The Moribund MarionetteAnother good one.
Very good, I should say.
Anyway, try to fix your grammar, though. You had a lot of mistakes in your other one (about anorexia), and a few in this one as well.
Wonderful and flowing.
~Writer of Darkness~
5/9/2004 c1 WarriorHeart
wow. a to-the-point message, put together in a great form and unique style. great work.
wow. a to-the-point message, put together in a great form and unique style. great work.