for Cynicism5/4/2005 c17 Chloe
yeah! i started reading this awhile ago and finally got back to it. i lv the story. i can't wait for an update
yeah! i started reading this awhile ago and finally got back to it. i lv the story. i can't wait for an update
4/28/2005 c17 K.T.Wood
hmm, not sure why i didn't review the chapter earlier! Loved it . Please update again soon!
hmm, not sure why i didn't review the chapter earlier! Loved it . Please update again soon!
4/20/2005 c1 
1diff-me
love the plot, and the fact that D is so effing insensitive *gwiggles.. and me likes A.. specially his attitude, reminds me of me.. xcept just totally way cooler.. mokies the first 2 paragraphs turned me off, since it began with I.. just not really into first person stories.. deal better with 3rd person.. but just a personal preference.. well ive read up to the last chap.. and my hunger for yummy shounen-ai avec les garçons qui sont très disturbed was not satiated.. i decided to click upon your profile.. for more.. stories.. but alas.. nothing else caught my eye.. but.. she clicked upon your site.. and BEHOLD!.. a talking journal!...argblasshfgsffs.. *dies.. i must say you're teh most awesome person ever.. avec your friend.. i still dunno who's who.. but ehh.. fuck that, i'll idolize you from afar... *shifty glances.. tataloo dear, keep on writing[don't even think of reading anything on my profile. 2 lazy 2 delete everything]
1diff-melove the plot, and the fact that D is so effing insensitive *gwiggles.. and me likes A.. specially his attitude, reminds me of me.. xcept just totally way cooler.. mokies the first 2 paragraphs turned me off, since it began with I.. just not really into first person stories.. deal better with 3rd person.. but just a personal preference.. well ive read up to the last chap.. and my hunger for yummy shounen-ai avec les garçons qui sont très disturbed was not satiated.. i decided to click upon your profile.. for more.. stories.. but alas.. nothing else caught my eye.. but.. she clicked upon your site.. and BEHOLD!.. a talking journal!...argblasshfgsffs.. *dies.. i must say you're teh most awesome person ever.. avec your friend.. i still dunno who's who.. but ehh.. fuck that, i'll idolize you from afar... *shifty glances.. tataloo dear, keep on writing[don't even think of reading anything on my profile. 2 lazy 2 delete everything]
4/19/2005 c17 6Wolfwitch
I had started reading this before... I don't see why I stopped, it's really good. Devon is really kick-ass. Poor Adriel, though. What Devon did was cruel.
6WolfwitchI had started reading this before... I don't see why I stopped, it's really good. Devon is really kick-ass. Poor Adriel, though. What Devon did was cruel.
4/19/2005 c1 Rouge
Perhaps Devon needs a little push or maybe more of a shove to realise he cares for Adriel. This could be provided by someone else fancying Adriel. Alas, I love triangles.
Perhaps Devon needs a little push or maybe more of a shove to realise he cares for Adriel. This could be provided by someone else fancying Adriel. Alas, I love triangles.
4/17/2005 c17 Dobz
I LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON SOON SOON!
~Dobz~
I LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON SOON SOON!
~Dobz~
4/16/2005 c17 FamousOneLiners
such amazing-ness
such amazing-ness
4/16/2005 c8 FamousOneLiners
LOL Yes cradle of FILTH sucks but yr story totally doesntnow to read the rest of itt[=and those weakertan lines are awesome.
LOL Yes cradle of FILTH sucks but yr story totally doesntnow to read the rest of itt[=and those weakertan lines are awesome.
4/14/2005 c17 Beloved Animosity
Hi! I was so happy to see that you updated! (Still grinning!) But I want more! (Whinning like an annoying child.) Guess I'll have to wait though, ne? That's okay. I'll wait. This is a really good story. Keep it up!
Hi! I was so happy to see that you updated! (Still grinning!) But I want more! (Whinning like an annoying child.) Guess I'll have to wait though, ne? That's okay. I'll wait. This is a really good story. Keep it up!
4/11/2005 c4 1Yaoi-Sonata
lol, that was majorly funny. smoking pot... lol, i was cracking up. good stuff you got going!
1Yaoi-Sonatalol, that was majorly funny. smoking pot... lol, i was cracking up. good stuff you got going!
4/11/2005 c17 retoxrainbow
haha, Adriel has Devons "grandfather's" watch. Awesome story! Update soon!
haha, Adriel has Devons "grandfather's" watch. Awesome story! Update soon!
4/11/2005 c16 retoxrainbow
Aw. Devon's a meanie! (still my favorite though) he just didnt care that Adriel was crying! I like that Adriel is painting the picture of Devon.
Aw. Devon's a meanie! (still my favorite though) he just didnt care that Adriel was crying! I like that Adriel is painting the picture of Devon.
4/11/2005 c4 retoxrainbow
i was laughing my ass when devon started coughing and Adriel sugested the pot thing.
i was laughing my ass when devon started coughing and Adriel sugested the pot thing.