6/2/2019 c33 Blackcat8539
Well, it's 2019 and I just read your story and loved it. :) Thanks for gifting me, and everyone else, this lovely story. I really enjoyed it.
Well, it's 2019 and I just read your story and loved it. :) Thanks for gifting me, and everyone else, this lovely story. I really enjoyed it.
5/7/2019 c25 Popdude125
Igor! Fetch the optical bleach! This author made me read that with my own two eyes!
Igor! Fetch the optical bleach! This author made me read that with my own two eyes!
6/15/2018 c33 Kate7950
So I'm like 14 years too late on this story but i loved it so much! Some of the best I've read ever. Thank you for sharing this with the internet.
So I'm like 14 years too late on this story but i loved it so much! Some of the best I've read ever. Thank you for sharing this with the internet.
2/5/2018 c33 Kirsty
Reading this again for the first time in a long time - and I still very much love it! It's so good when stories you've loved still have relevance! However, I was in my teens when I first read this, and now I'm thirty! Haha!
Reading this again for the first time in a long time - and I still very much love it! It's so good when stories you've loved still have relevance! However, I was in my teens when I first read this, and now I'm thirty! Haha!
9/26/2017 c33 Acie
Love this story! Finished it in a few hours and am now panicking over that English lit homework due in tomorrow, so thanks for that!
Love this story! Finished it in a few hours and am now panicking over that English lit homework due in tomorrow, so thanks for that!
9/17/2017 c33 Guest
LOVELY!
LOVELY!
6/23/2017 c33 Bluesoap
Hi,
I still doubt you will ever read this, but I must write this - even though I rarely do.
I've had a great time reading the whole story! I really like the ending, it seems very appropriate. The only thing I might have, is a slight (very, very slight) misgiving (I wish I had a better word to use than this, it seems too negative) about the build up to the ending in the previous chapters. Although it has been well done, I still feel like there needed to be a little more of their frustrations with their lack of contact instead of only one example from each side. A few more of those moments from each side and I feel like it would've been perfect, but of course, that's just my personal opinion. In fact, I believe it rounded up nicely. I very much enjoyed the whole process between the pair.
Though.. I am still very curious about the truth on how they got together. After all, the details were never revealed on why they got married in the first place nor who suggested it, but maybe that'll stay a mystery forever.
Thank you for writing such a lovely story. It was fun.
Hi,
I still doubt you will ever read this, but I must write this - even though I rarely do.
I've had a great time reading the whole story! I really like the ending, it seems very appropriate. The only thing I might have, is a slight (very, very slight) misgiving (I wish I had a better word to use than this, it seems too negative) about the build up to the ending in the previous chapters. Although it has been well done, I still feel like there needed to be a little more of their frustrations with their lack of contact instead of only one example from each side. A few more of those moments from each side and I feel like it would've been perfect, but of course, that's just my personal opinion. In fact, I believe it rounded up nicely. I very much enjoyed the whole process between the pair.
Though.. I am still very curious about the truth on how they got together. After all, the details were never revealed on why they got married in the first place nor who suggested it, but maybe that'll stay a mystery forever.
Thank you for writing such a lovely story. It was fun.
6/23/2017 c27 Bluesoap
Hi,
I saw a sentence that didn't seem quite right. It was, "You certainly have to right to be throwing stones about relationships." I believe you meant to write "have no right" instead of "have to right".
Although, seeing your profile's activity log, I seriously doubt you will ever see this review, I must saw that I really like this story so far. I stumbled across it by chance and I am glad I did. It's been a delightful read and I can't wait to finish the story.
Hi,
I saw a sentence that didn't seem quite right. It was, "You certainly have to right to be throwing stones about relationships." I believe you meant to write "have no right" instead of "have to right".
Although, seeing your profile's activity log, I seriously doubt you will ever see this review, I must saw that I really like this story so far. I stumbled across it by chance and I am glad I did. It's been a delightful read and I can't wait to finish the story.
6/15/2017 c33 Guest
I liked the fact that throughout the story, no matter what happened, it was pretty clear what they felt... and yet neither of them had to say it at all. Very well crafted .
I liked the fact that throughout the story, no matter what happened, it was pretty clear what they felt... and yet neither of them had to say it at all. Very well crafted .
11/18/2016 c33 74AlysonSerenaStone
Wonderful story! I loved Jude and Lira's romance! It was such a fun read!
Wonderful story! I loved Jude and Lira's romance! It was such a fun read!
5/5/2016 c21 The new guy
smiles for dayys!
smiles for dayys!
5/5/2016 c20 The new guy
HeheheheahahahAHAHAHHAH FINALLY! Let the love train begin
HeheheheahahahAHAHAHHAH FINALLY! Let the love train begin
5/5/2016 c17 The new guy
GOSH DAMN IT WOMAN!
GOSH DAMN IT WOMAN!
5/5/2016 c16 The new guy
Finally! Angry sex scenes are the best!
Finally! Angry sex scenes are the best!