
11/12/2014 c1 Moony1972
Oh, this is an AWESOME beginning.
And the first story I am reading on this site. Be proud of yourself.
Oh, this is an AWESOME beginning.
And the first story I am reading on this site. Be proud of yourself.
8/30/2014 c33 Guest
So darn cute!
So darn cute!
8/24/2014 c33 Leila
So it's been like, an entire decade since you published this online but I just wanted to say that I've read this at least 4 times and each time I do, it still remains one of my favourite stories on FP. (: Thank you for this gift to... mankind (?!) :D
So it's been like, an entire decade since you published this online but I just wanted to say that I've read this at least 4 times and each time I do, it still remains one of my favourite stories on FP. (: Thank you for this gift to... mankind (?!) :D
4/9/2014 c20
1lost keys
Ooooooh-Yeah! You go Amanda! Lira has finally gotten what she deserves! I was thinking the exact same thing. That she shouldn't be verbally bashing her mom when she also has problems. Hallelujah! I was beginning to dislike Lira a bit but no I love her again now that's she has been put in place!

Ooooooh-Yeah! You go Amanda! Lira has finally gotten what she deserves! I was thinking the exact same thing. That she shouldn't be verbally bashing her mom when she also has problems. Hallelujah! I was beginning to dislike Lira a bit but no I love her again now that's she has been put in place!
3/19/2014 c33
7Fakety Mcfakename
Aplauds. Congratulations on resolving your story. it's a feat not many young writers reach. careful, you might get me into romance.

Aplauds. Congratulations on resolving your story. it's a feat not many young writers reach. careful, you might get me into romance.
3/17/2014 c6 Fakety Mcfakename
Awwwww yeah, characterization.
A while back, you said that this was a traditional story, but you were going to try and include non-traditional elements. You've succeeded in your characters. They're really well done, and they grow on you. That scene with the blanket was really sweet.
Awwwww yeah, characterization.
A while back, you said that this was a traditional story, but you were going to try and include non-traditional elements. You've succeeded in your characters. They're really well done, and they grow on you. That scene with the blanket was really sweet.
3/15/2014 c1
4soniabonia786
Holy Shit! I'm on the first chapter and I'm LOVING IT!
You're an amazing writer! Love your vocab!

Holy Shit! I'm on the first chapter and I'm LOVING IT!
You're an amazing writer! Love your vocab!
2/27/2014 c1 Guest
Ewww Blair and Mahaw. He prob had on them black socks too lmaooooo when lira came over to see Blair
Ewww Blair and Mahaw. He prob had on them black socks too lmaooooo when lira came over to see Blair