for Strands of Golden Sun6/25/2004 c1 
127Eirien
Beautiful, I like the fantastic, fanciful feel of this, very much achieved by your lavish use of adjectives which works really well here. Those last two lines are witty, reminded me of T.S.Eliot. ;-) Good job.
127EirienBeautiful, I like the fantastic, fanciful feel of this, very much achieved by your lavish use of adjectives which works really well here. Those last two lines are witty, reminded me of T.S.Eliot. ;-) Good job.
5/16/2004 c1 A Beautiful Nightmare
Beautiful... This is extremely well written... keep up the great work...
Beautiful... This is extremely well written... keep up the great work...