
5/12/2004 c1
49Amanad
I usually don't care much for unrhymed poetry, just the way I was taught, I guess. But I kind of like this, even though it's dark and morbid and spitting bile, I feel the soul of the poem here, that's something most people are afraid to accomplish.

I usually don't care much for unrhymed poetry, just the way I was taught, I guess. But I kind of like this, even though it's dark and morbid and spitting bile, I feel the soul of the poem here, that's something most people are afraid to accomplish.
5/12/2004 c1 Hail the Warrior
Hmm, I like this but I was kind of confused with the summary. Thanks for reading and reviewing my haikus.
Htw
Hmm, I like this but I was kind of confused with the summary. Thanks for reading and reviewing my haikus.
Htw