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9/17/2005 c1 25techielovn
This is the first poem I've read in quite awhile that rhymed that was actually good. I liked how you didn't force the rhyme by using a word out of context or making up a word.
5/22/2005 c1 Clap Clap Raise Your Hands
wow, all the sibilants make this seem really dream like, really beautiful, x weasel within x

p.s. Emma by Jane Austen is also a good read
3/28/2005 c1 queeniee
that was a very good poem. i liked how all the lines rhymed with eachother and it flowed nicely.
5/23/2004 c1 119AntiPleasure
Wow that was quite neat, haven't really seen a poem where all the words at the end rhyme.. anyway, this imagery line is good "And comforting clouds are quick to surround" I figured this poem would sound forced because of all the rhyming but hey, it's well done.
Jenna xx

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