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8/31/2004 c1 30Roadside Dryer
Sad, the girl's boyfriend should like her for who she is, not for the perfect woman's body (she doesn't sound all the great to me :))
7/2/2004 c1 88breakme
Wow theres so much emotion put into this that it hurt me. I can feel the pain of the woman The last paragraph and last few words hurt the most, almost like a dagger going into me and it wasn't even my pain, it was hers.
5/16/2004 c1 28Rionarayne
Roses really smell like boohoo. That was so sad... it makes me want to do in my room and cry for three days. Very good.
The Oprah
5/14/2004 c1 34Iris Devine
That was a sad story, but very very short. Maybe expand it? The idea and feelings are very good, very true, and very universal.
5/12/2004 c1 1Virginia Rose
This simply proves the saying that quality is better than quantity. It captures the sadness, shock and inevitability of the moment to, well, perfection.

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