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for The Third Day

5/14/2004 c2 11Misoshiru
this is an interesting story. it sounds like a cross between pitch black and 28 days. i dunno. its cool, update soon!
5/14/2004 c2 404358034958034
Just as good as the last, if with a few spelling errors. Keep up the good work!
5/13/2004 c1 404358034958034
Intruiging, do more!
5/13/2004 c1 22slave to the voices
My biggest problem with this story is that it's a video recording but there's no action. Am I watching two undescribable and nameless men standing (or sitting or lying down or...) around talking? It reads more like a tape recording. Now for the good news; it's a great idea and I will be looking forward to more in the future. The dialogue is believable and well written. Good job, keep writing.
5/13/2004 c1 11Wolfie Star26
that was wonderful, you seem to know alot about that stuff, anyway, please update soon.
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