6/4/2005 c1 5L. Conks
Excellent, as usual. Very soul-tapping and heart-touching. Few people can describe something with such precise meaning and detail, without ever jumping out and blurting the physical events. Breaking a friendship is nowhere near as physical as it is emotional.
Excellent, as usual. Very soul-tapping and heart-touching. Few people can describe something with such precise meaning and detail, without ever jumping out and blurting the physical events. Breaking a friendship is nowhere near as physical as it is emotional.
5/13/2004 c1 28Coffey100
i liked it. thats cool how you didnt go into detail about what the incident was.. kinda lets your imagination drift
i liked it. thats cool how you didnt go into detail about what the incident was.. kinda lets your imagination drift
5/13/2004 c1 3novembrewolf
This is a great poem! I love the way you identified with something so simple, yet so complex.
This is a great poem! I love the way you identified with something so simple, yet so complex.