for And Life Goes On12/5/2005 c3 zippy
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8/8/2004 c2 Your missing triplet
okay Terry.. you haven't updated dangit.. do u want me to bite u? cuz I will.. not only did you leave me at birth and not only is it 5:30 am and not only is my bf getting up in an hour and a half.. but but BUT BUT BUT (is that enough buts?) you left me with a cliff hander.. i hate you =) r/r me now since i'm one up on ya hahhahahahahhahaha oh and call me about the movie.
~Missing Triplet
okay Terry.. you haven't updated dangit.. do u want me to bite u? cuz I will.. not only did you leave me at birth and not only is it 5:30 am and not only is my bf getting up in an hour and a half.. but but BUT BUT BUT (is that enough buts?) you left me with a cliff hander.. i hate you =) r/r me now since i'm one up on ya hahhahahahahhahaha oh and call me about the movie.
~Missing Triplet
7/29/2004 c1 
10DrunkenMonkeyKing
Yes, finally got a chance to read this. Good stuff, and no, Lancelot is not gay, just extremely, extremely violent.
But he's a Knight of The Round Table, so I guess we'll have to forgive him for killing the Bride's father.
10DrunkenMonkeyKingYes, finally got a chance to read this. Good stuff, and no, Lancelot is not gay, just extremely, extremely violent.
But he's a Knight of The Round Table, so I guess we'll have to forgive him for killing the Bride's father.
5/31/2004 c2 Black Locket
People need to review this. It makes me cry when I lcick it and see only like 12 reviews. Review people, review! -runs off to abuse non-reviewing people-
They are the scum on the meniscus of Fictionpress.
So are ya going to update soon or what?
People need to review this. It makes me cry when I lcick it and see only like 12 reviews. Review people, review! -runs off to abuse non-reviewing people-
They are the scum on the meniscus of Fictionpress.
So are ya going to update soon or what?
5/31/2004 c2 Sir Keilah
Well, I never read the original version of this, but this one is fairly good. I do have issues with cliffhanger endings because then I... well, lets see, I wonder about what is going to happen for about the next ten seconds and then wander off dejected, but that's not the point. Please update. I like the characters so far, and am interesting in seeing more of their personalities and of course, would love to figure out what's going on... it's a really strong beginning, and I look forward to reading it when you update next.
-Keilah
Well, I never read the original version of this, but this one is fairly good. I do have issues with cliffhanger endings because then I... well, lets see, I wonder about what is going to happen for about the next ten seconds and then wander off dejected, but that's not the point. Please update. I like the characters so far, and am interesting in seeing more of their personalities and of course, would love to figure out what's going on... it's a really strong beginning, and I look forward to reading it when you update next.
-Keilah
5/29/2004 c2 Black Locket
Well this is different. I dont remember Di's brother being... wahtever's wrong with him. (Deaf I'm assuming.) Either I have a really bad memory or... or...
YOU CHANGED IT ON ME!
-runs off weeping-
Lol. Anyway I like the change. It flows better and, uh, its better? Yeah... thats it.
Well this is different. I dont remember Di's brother being... wahtever's wrong with him. (Deaf I'm assuming.) Either I have a really bad memory or... or...
YOU CHANGED IT ON ME!
-runs off weeping-
Lol. Anyway I like the change. It flows better and, uh, its better? Yeah... thats it.
5/20/2004 c1 2Lotuss Tears
Very nice start here, i don't think you suck at Romance at all, love the banter between friends, it was like i was right there in the car with them.
Hinting at the abuse to start with was good too, stories about abuse can be rough and emotional and sometimes hard on a sensitive reader, too much at once can be an overload, but awesome job thus far =] keep up the good work
2Lotuss TearsVery nice start here, i don't think you suck at Romance at all, love the banter between friends, it was like i was right there in the car with them.
Hinting at the abuse to start with was good too, stories about abuse can be rough and emotional and sometimes hard on a sensitive reader, too much at once can be an overload, but awesome job thus far =] keep up the good work
5/20/2004 c1 42Riely Marie
Okay... Here's review #1 lol... any how.. it really didn't change much from what you wrote, and I saw... except... yeah okay it didn't change much lol okay.. but heres my /actual/ review...
I thought it was good... some punctuation errors.. cammas and all that jazz... anyhow... YOU BETTER GO REVIEW MY STUFF! I like it... umm... hm I already know what his secret it lol... your not good @ hiding stuff Terry... *wink* I still love ya! muahhahahha okay anyways... I think I've written you a novel.. so is this long enough for ya? any who...
Keep writing!
~Riely Marie~
42Riely MarieOkay... Here's review #1 lol... any how.. it really didn't change much from what you wrote, and I saw... except... yeah okay it didn't change much lol okay.. but heres my /actual/ review...
I thought it was good... some punctuation errors.. cammas and all that jazz... anyhow... YOU BETTER GO REVIEW MY STUFF! I like it... umm... hm I already know what his secret it lol... your not good @ hiding stuff Terry... *wink* I still love ya! muahhahahha okay anyways... I think I've written you a novel.. so is this long enough for ya? any who...
Keep writing!
~Riely Marie~
5/18/2004 c1 DMK
Can't read it now (in a hurry) but I'm glad to see you finally put this back up! It's about goddamn time!
Can't read it now (in a hurry) but I'm glad to see you finally put this back up! It's about goddamn time!
5/17/2004 c1 Black Locket
When Aethrazip e-mailed me to tell me this was back up I called her a liar. Lucky for me she has a good sense of humor.
About the story. Its even better than it was last time. I hope you don't take it down again? -puppy eyes-
When Aethrazip e-mailed me to tell me this was back up I called her a liar. Lucky for me she has a good sense of humor.
About the story. Its even better than it was last time. I hope you don't take it down again? -puppy eyes-
5/16/2004 c1 Zip
Lookit that, you. Three reviews already. ^^
Now that I've disappointed you (you thought this was from someone else, didn't you?), I'm off to put a shameless plug for this in Lagrimas ch10's author's note.
~Zip
Lookit that, you. Three reviews already. ^^
Now that I've disappointed you (you thought this was from someone else, didn't you?), I'm off to put a shameless plug for this in Lagrimas ch10's author's note.
~Zip
5/16/2004 c1 24Sidewalks
Hii. I had read this already but I kinda wandered off and forgot to leave a review. I suck. Anyway, yes. You've got really likeable characters here and I guess we'll get to know more about them in the future. -nods. Sorry if I don't say much more, I'm running on insomnia and my brain died but I did like this. I'll make sure I read and review once you'll have another chapter up!
24SidewalksHii. I had read this already but I kinda wandered off and forgot to leave a review. I suck. Anyway, yes. You've got really likeable characters here and I guess we'll get to know more about them in the future. -nods. Sorry if I don't say much more, I'm running on insomnia and my brain died but I did like this. I'll make sure I read and review once you'll have another chapter up!