5/28/2004 c1 11Cesy
Good poem, spelling mistakes detract a little - "balloon filled too far" and "my highest dreams" need sorting, unless they were intentionally wrong and I'm just being blonde yet again.

5/20/2004 c1 111Crimson-Fantasy
hey nice I know how you feel...sadly...I have these exsact feelings so this one touched me made even better even though it alredy had good word choice I dea and form yes I think of these kind of things no not really to much but slightly and I thought is was all good so*:)*K.P.