for Umbra2/26/2005 c1 M L
Does the lightening symbolize cleansing? That's what I was thinking until the last stanza when you mention the rain. I'm still not so great with poems, I had to read this one twice. I don't understand: "That still exists for none to see,Perpetual; I cannot win." So maybe once the rain is gone, It never really cleansed anything, like trying to wash water-proof leather in water. Bad analogy on my part, perhaps.
Does the lightening symbolize cleansing? That's what I was thinking until the last stanza when you mention the rain. I'm still not so great with poems, I had to read this one twice. I don't understand: "That still exists for none to see,Perpetual; I cannot win." So maybe once the rain is gone, It never really cleansed anything, like trying to wash water-proof leather in water. Bad analogy on my part, perhaps.
8/2/2004 c1 Deirdra Chaeli
I am not sure I have entirely grasped what you mean to say, but this is simply amazing. Absolutely beautiful, I must say.
I am not sure I have entirely grasped what you mean to say, but this is simply amazing. Absolutely beautiful, I must say.
5/15/2004 c1 
301sirius chatham
Wow, very very very good. It's full of amazing imagery, I love it.
great great poem, certainly on my fav list.
cheers,
sirius chatham
ps r/r my stuff
301sirius chathamWow, very very very good. It's full of amazing imagery, I love it.
great great poem, certainly on my fav list.
cheers,
sirius chatham
ps r/r my stuff