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3/17/2008 c1 41Erma Buckles
This poem is really creepy and realyy good. I like it lostamuch. WRITE MORE STUFF! (I don't really like your brothers either, by the way)
4/4/2007 c1 ErosAndSunsets
oh i like this. I love how the form is sort of chopped into segments, and your ending lines are so awesome. I also like how the perspective changed; it kept me interested to get to the end. nice style of writing!
1/14/2007 c1 4Autoro
Very well written. I like how the main poem and the hidden one are saying the opposite of each other. I wonder which one is true?
8/19/2005 c1 1Triden
it was a good poem, except sometimes i thought the way it was cut was a mit *too* choppy. (i know it's supposed to be a bit choopy) breaking the line like that should emphasize important words, not words like 'the'.
6/10/2005 c1 11Cloud Burst
very powerful work!
6/9/2004 c1 45Simple Enigma
Wow, your really talented! I love how you use 'old words'- "Twas" that sort of thing. and the format is really interesting. Good job!
5/26/2004 c1 91High Sky
this is good. do you live along the san andreas fault, in california? we get bad earthquakes here. a little broken, but good nonetheless.
5/20/2004 c1 5Eagle Seance
Is it just me, or is there some foreboding atmosphere here? Anyway, you might not what that means- a great poem- wonderful expression and appropriate use of short lines. Good stuff!
5/16/2004 c1 11Earthsong12
Cool! I know the pattern, na-na-na-boo-boo! OK, I’ve R&R’d (as you so put it) all your stuff, so go R%R mine! Especially my new sci-fi story! ^_^

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