for The Dephts Of My Heart8/8/2005 c1 
8BadSweets
Hey! Thanks for telling me about the mistakes in Chapter 3. Well, the J brothers have pretty similar names so I got them confused! How embarrassing. This is the second time something went wrong with that chapter. First time was when I somehow replaced Chapter One with Chapter Three.
Anyway, sorry for using this review to tell you stuff. Let me go on to your poem!
I think this line 'blood cries from my eyes at the thought of not seeing or knowing you' was excellent and quite unique. Was the spelling of the title deliberate? It's correctly spelled 'depths', I think. Also, whoa, really strong emotion in this poem. Very intense.
8BadSweetsHey! Thanks for telling me about the mistakes in Chapter 3. Well, the J brothers have pretty similar names so I got them confused! How embarrassing. This is the second time something went wrong with that chapter. First time was when I somehow replaced Chapter One with Chapter Three.
Anyway, sorry for using this review to tell you stuff. Let me go on to your poem!
I think this line 'blood cries from my eyes at the thought of not seeing or knowing you' was excellent and quite unique. Was the spelling of the title deliberate? It's correctly spelled 'depths', I think. Also, whoa, really strong emotion in this poem. Very intense.
7/13/2004 c1 16kaika switched
Very emotional, but something people seem to be able to relate to. Very well written, too. Keep writing!
16kaika switchedVery emotional, but something people seem to be able to relate to. Very well written, too. Keep writing!
5/16/2004 c1 Luci Cat
Your poem is really sad, but it is a true emotion. You did a really good job at putting words to a hard situtation. I like your poem and the images you put into it and I hope you keep writing.
Your poem is really sad, but it is a true emotion. You did a really good job at putting words to a hard situtation. I like your poem and the images you put into it and I hope you keep writing.